So after creating the plot for the movie and identifying intentions for the whole movie, we were able to piece together a script that is a better representation of our goals.
This introduction is a huge improvement from the last one because it is a lot shorter and plausible, but it also introduces the movie revealing themes and foreshadowing.
QUICK SUMMARY: Trevor Mazzini is in his bathroom doing his business when the shower curtain ruffles next to him. Inside the shower is a bloodied person tied to the faucet. Instead of harming him, Trevor shares an intimate moment with his hostage. The guy calms down a little bit, and then Trevor realizes he can't really keep him in here forever and then kills him.
This is a lot better because it introduces the character and his personality: an empathetic killer. It is clear Trevor cares about the guy, but his violent tendencies make him act in a horrendously immoral way. This feeds into our theme of blurring the lines between good and bad.
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